Welcome to my blog. I'm in Mamaku 2 and my teacher is Miss Leigh. We're a class of Year 5 and 6 students in the Mamaku Hub at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
This is my summer holiday survival kit we normal go on holiday to nelson were it is warm and sunny and we go to the beach a lot and that is what my survival kit is based on.
Hi Heidi, I like your blog on the holiday survival kit. I like the way you listed the things you need to take on it. When I read your blog it made me smile because I like the top paragraph. Next time just make sure that it makes sense and that you capitals in the right spot.
Hi Heidi, This a great document of what you need to take when you go on holiday. This reminds me of when I was reading my book to see what I need to take on holiday. I like how you used punctuation, spelling, making sense, and capitals.
Hi Heidi, I like how you have got colours that match what you’re talking about. It showed that you put a lot of effort into your post. It reminds me of when I go to Punakaiki. Next time make sure you have punctuation.
Hi Heidi,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog on the holiday survival kit. I like the way you listed the things you need to take on it. When I read your blog it made me smile because I like the top paragraph. Next time just make sure that it makes sense and that you capitals in the right spot.
Hi Heidi,
ReplyDeleteThis a great document of what you need to take when you go on holiday. This reminds me of when I was reading my book to see what I need to take on holiday. I like how you used punctuation, spelling, making sense, and capitals.
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ReplyDeleteHi Heidi,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have got colours that match what you’re talking about. It showed that you put a lot of effort into your post. It reminds me of when I go to Punakaiki. Next time make sure you have punctuation.