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Tuesday 30 June 2015

Random Friday writing

RANDOM FRIDAY WRITING

It's winter but... there is a small sunset witch is very pretty it may look cold but it is warm. The sunset is making the snow on the ground glitter like a thousand stars it is very beautiful. Light coming from behind the trees. Clouds turning pink and orange. Snow melting away as the sun is shining over it. I keep walking and the more steps i take the warmer it gets and then i see the beautiful sunset. 

2 comments:

  1. Wow heidi your writing is very good i like the last sentence and how you describe things so that you can imagine it easily good work

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  2. Hi Heidi I love this piece of writing. It made me feel warm and happy when I was reading it :) How do you feel when you read it? Can you please print me a copy of it so I can put it on my wall. Well done from Aunty Tarn

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